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Jun 17Liked by Saffron Morter-Laing

Really powerful and cruelly desperate!

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Thank you - I hadn’t thought of desperation in relation to this but I see this so clearly now

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Jun 17Liked by Saffron Morter-Laing

But we are all on the boat <3 love this piece, thank you for sharing. The painting adds a powerful touch.

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I’m so glad you said that about the painting - I genuinely spent an hour trying to select the right one.

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Jun 16Liked by Saffron Morter-Laing

Fantastic last stanza!

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Thank you!

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